Sunday, February 22, 2015
Blog #6
I really enjoyed the workshop; I received great feedback and ideas on how to improve my paper. The feedback I received was positive and the advice I was given will definitely improve my essay. The group consensus determined that I needed to tie the ideas in my final paragraph into the beginning parts so that the story made better sense. Dr. Inskeep also provided me with good feedback, catching cliche phrases and helping me tell my story in different points of view and person so the affect of the moment I am describing is more effective. I will definitely be using al the comments everyone provided me and improving my paper. For my feedback that provided to my fellow classmates, I think helping them separate ideas and helping the structure flow better was the most useful feedback I provided. Also, helping them find better endings to wrap up there story was also another critique that I suggested.
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I agree with you! I also recieved very positive feed back and god ways to improve my paper. I really enjoyed it and I think it was muh better than what I was expecting it to be.
ReplyDeleteSame! Hearing feedback about your paper was even interesting to me; I felt my own writing skills were strengthened through hearing other's input.
ReplyDeleteI think the workshops were a lot more beneficial for us then we all anticipated.